I'm applying for an internship to study a master's in a U.S. university to specialize in graphics programming and simulation.
I'm from Spain, and they rate the SoP from 1 to 8. If I don't get 8 points I get disqualified because of the competitivity and low total number of granted internships.
I will share this statement with my professors too but I would really appreciate some help online. Please have a look and tell me if it is boring, or if you honestly like it. The maximum length is 3 pages, so If you find any useless and generic area I will delete it. All criticism is welcomed.
I've already been told that my Universities section is weak, that I need to say something special about each one. What do you think about that?
Btw, the link in the document is not available yet.
Thanks in advance.