Kevdk

Hi Guys, I was wondering if I might get some help on the GRE AWA, specifically in regard to essay revision? I wrote two essays, both for the Issue Task and the Analytical Task, as practice for the exam and need someone to review/score it for me. If you could provide any help I would greatly appreciate it. Here is the scoring guide: https://www.ets.org/gre/institutions/scores/interpret/issue/. I'll attach my essays below. Thanks, Kevin 2 GRE essay Part 2.docx