RabiaBKhan Posted March 1, 2014 Share Posted March 1, 2014 Hi all, I am new to the forum! Just a brief intro; I am a 20 year old Pakistani (female) currently enrolled in the final year of BS Computer Science degree program. I am analysing my options for a masters abroad. The fields I will be targeting are Computer Sciences and Cognitive Sciences. I have a GPA of 3.84 (4.00) and belong to the top 1% of my department (actually I am the topper). I recently took the test (for the 1st time) and got a score of 163 Q and 155 V. Not really satisfied! I had troubles preparing for the verbal as I am not a native English speaker. But I am still shocked as my English skills are actually very good or I thought! I am going to take TOEFL this week and am hoping for a 100+ score. I would further like to add that I am real low on financial resources, been studying until now on scholarships (merit ones). Even the test fees were hard to pay! I will not be retaking my GRE and instead will work on my SOP. I have made a draft version and would like to ask if anyone here is willing to critique it for me. Like what to add? What to delete? Edit? So please leave a reply, I will PM you my SOP! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dedi Posted March 1, 2014 Share Posted March 1, 2014 Psh, my verbal is subpar (151 on practice tests) for someone who is a native speaker. You're fine. I might be able to help with a cognitive sciences SOP if you have computer sciences and cognitive sciences separated. Go ahead and PM me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
k_angie Posted March 1, 2014 Share Posted March 1, 2014 Oh well it's not my field but I can go through it if you want! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RabiaBKhan Posted March 1, 2014 Author Share Posted March 1, 2014 Thank you for responding! I have messaged you my SOP draft! Please review it and suggest me improvements. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AdilB990 Posted March 2, 2014 Share Posted March 2, 2014 @RabiaBKhan: Getting your SOP critiqued is a very wise idea. Gives a whole new perspective that you might overlook on your own. I did the same during my application process last year, and it helped me a lot in improving my SOP. A few tweaks here and there can have a significant impact. After all, it is THE most important part of your application package. RabiaBKhan 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plissken Posted March 2, 2014 Share Posted March 2, 2014 I don't know much about computer or cognitive sciences, but I do know a few things about writing essays, and would be glad to critique your SOP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RabiaBKhan Posted March 3, 2014 Author Share Posted March 3, 2014 Thank you people! Please check your inbox ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flandre Scarlet Posted March 4, 2014 Share Posted March 4, 2014 Hey there, I'll read it if you want an extra pair of eyes on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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