thelogician Posted November 25, 2014 Share Posted November 25, 2014 (edited) I am applying for a PhD in Computer Science and I was hoping someone would be willing to critique my statement of purpose. You can access and comment on the draft here. I can also PM it to you. Thank you for considering my request. Edited November 25, 2014 by thelogician Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cookie Posted November 25, 2014 Share Posted November 25, 2014 Too long, awkward transitions, and no focus. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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