exitiumax Posted January 24, 2016 Share Posted January 24, 2016 Currently working on my Equity and Inclusion statement as part of Boston University's School of Education application. I am extremely passionate about equity and inclusion, having focused my studies in Civil Rights and my plan of becoming a teacher in a low socioeconomic and minority area, yet, I'm struggling with this essay. The length is two pages, so far I'm at about one, but I don't exactly know which parts to expand on for length without sounding redundant. If anyone can read it and give me some feedback that would be greatly appreciated! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rising_star Posted January 25, 2016 Share Posted January 25, 2016 Honestly, a succinct one page essay is better than a sprawling or babbling two page essay. Are you talking about single spaced or double spaced, btw? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
exitiumax Posted January 25, 2016 Author Share Posted January 25, 2016 10 hours ago, rising_star said: Honestly, a succinct one page essay is better than a sprawling or babbling two page essay. Are you talking about single spaced or double spaced, btw? double spaced, so realistically it's currently pretty short. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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