Hello all,
I am applying for the PhD in History and what is hard for me is to pinpoint WHY I chose history and if that story is interesting enough. I want my personal statement to stand out: Studying history, contributing to historical scholarship, and teaching my passion to others is something I genuinely would love to do for the rest of my life! So here's my story as briefly as I can tell it...
Throughout my education I have been an A student. In grammar school, the subject that stood out to me the most was Social Studies. I loved hearing true stories about the past especially of the country I was in. In high school, I began to learn more and more about history. At the same time,I come from a culture and an upbringing where I was expected to go to med school and if I did anything but become a medical doctor, I was considered a failure. And so, I pursued the path of medicine with a regret in my mind and heart of what could have happened if I pursued my true love of history. If I would ever mention how a historical place or a museum amused me, I would get that weird look from relatives. On holidays such as July 4th, I would get weird looks when i would tell the family why that day is bigger than just a day to have some BBQ (same for Thanksgiving). History and I were like Romeo and Juliet : the family and society would just not allow us to be together. They wanted Juliet to be with Paris (medical school).
During college, I learned that as long as I took a certain set of science classes, I could major in anything I wanted. As a last chance to learn more about my passion, I majored in history and minored in Chemistry and Biology. It just made it worse for me because I wanted history more than ever before. Long story short - where there is a will there is a way. There was never a will for me to go to med school and so I never was determined enough to work hard to get accepted into the school my family thought was best for me. (And by family I mean parents, siblings, cousins, aunts, and uncles - we are a close knit family). I put my foot down after graduation and said I was meant to study history and that I could achieve the same amount of success they desired for me, but just through a less traditional route than what they had in mind.
So thats my story....I dont know how well admissions committees are going to take this story into consideration of whether they should take me aboard but that was the complete truth. Can some of you please give me your opinion on this? Is my story something adcomms would like to hear? Does this story show them what they look for in a student?