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Revewing and Cutting Down SOP Help
jenmaybe replied to jenmaybe's topic in Statement of Purpose, Personal History, Diversity
I don't think that's harsh at all, margarets! I really appreciate the straight forward advice. I'm definitely having trouble jumping from "this is what I've done" to "this is how what I've done has influenced my desire to attend grad school". I'm afraid it's coming off as more of a cover letter because of this! -
Is anyone available to take a look at my SOP tonight or tomorrow? My deadline is quickly approaching and I think I'm losing my mind with reading it over and over again. As of now it is too long and needs to be cut by 100 words at least. I'm so bad at editing and keep adding things, argh! And yeah, I have no conclusion yet... I really appreciate any advice you guys can offer! Text is available here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Ekt1S__yqMMihc5x5MA__xZCuD88jLxN29sfkvSNLvc/pub