gradapplicant420

Please anyone let me know if you would be interested in critiquing and reviewing my SOP. Im applying for a specialized IR program that accepts about 20 out of 90 students each fall so the statement is very important! Im new here and don't know how much info I have to cancel out, so I won't post it just yet, but when I do, I'll take out all sensitive information and post it on here for open critique. thanks