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Your sentence is quite wordy. If I were you, I'd try shortening it (it'll help with the word count) and writing it in active voice. For example:

 

"I scored in the 98th percentile in the Nationwide Selection Examination for Academic Personnel and Graduate Studies, a test which is similar to the GRE, and, as a result, was awarded a full scholarship." 

 

Just some food for thought. 

Thank you for your advice

[Could you check these sentences, please? Which one is correct?]

Stop putting % after the number.. that's not how the English works. It's "98th percentile."

Ok. Does it work "98th percentile" according to the calculation ?

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According to my calculation : (4568/210000)*100=2.2% or 97.8%

 

What about the sentence structure? 

 

I was able to achieve my aim by scoring in the 98% percentile in the Nationwide Selection Examination for Academic Personnel and Graduate Studies, which is similar to GRE, and I was awarded the full scholarship.

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I need your help. I want to add this info. into my SOP.

Which one is the correct format ? 

 

I was able to achieve my aim by ranking 4568th among nearly 210,000 candidates  in the Nationwide Selection Examination for Academic Personnel and Graduate Studies, which is similar to GRE, and I was awarded the full scholarship.

 

I was able to achieve my aim by scoring in the 98% percentile in the Nationwide Selection Examination for Academic Personnel and Graduate Studies, which is similar to GRE, and I was awarded the full scholarship.

 

I was able to achieve my aim by scoring in the 2% percentile in the Nationwide Selection Examination for Academic Personnel and Graduate Studies, which is similar to GRE, and I was awarded the full scholarship.

 

Could you help me, please ? 

Thank you

[Help me, Please...]

I need your help. I want to add this info. into my SOP.

Which one is the correct format ? 

 

I was able to achieve my aim by ranking 4568th among nearly 210,000 candidates  in the Nationwide Selection Examination for Academic Personnel and Graduate Studies, which is similar to GRE, and I was awarded the full scholarship.

 

I was able to achieve my aim by scoring in the 98% percentile in the Nationwide Selection Examination for Academic Personnel and Graduate Studies, which is similar to GRE, and I was awarded the full scholarship.

 

I was able to achieve my aim by scoring in the 2% percentile in the Nationwide Selection Examination for Academic Personnel and Graduate Studies, which is similar to GRE, and I was awarded the full scholarship.

 

Could you help me, please ? 

 

[Texas A&M Geoscience for spring 2014- Results (When?)]

Does anyone have any idea when the admission results will be anounced for spring 2014?