VG/VG
VG/G
Concrete BI lacked. I brought up my interest in establishing scientific enrichment programs for kids K-12 for BI, and thought I hammered home the technical BI of my proposed research without being tooo redundant. Guess not.
Side note: I brought up my desire to avoid academia post grad school, and a reviewer said it was "notable" (bad/good idk)
nada