Jump to content

mikemckay

Members
  • Posts

    6
  • Joined

  • Last visited

Profile Information

  • Application Season
    2013 Spring

mikemckay's Achievements

Decaf

Decaf (2/10)

2

Reputation

  1. Try to avoid words that you wouldn't use in your daily language. Also how much are you changing this for each school? Seems good!
  2. I agree - better to shorten the reference to the GP you don't have to oversell the point. Additionally, I would avoid 'we' and focus on 'I' or 'me' comments. Good luck!
  3. If you're looking for help you should check out some professional editing services. Some ideas for you: www.gradually.me www.essayedge.com www.admitted.com Good luck man! Wish I could help more. You should post your SOP up here!
×
×
  • Create New...

Important Information

This website uses cookies to ensure you get the best experience on our website. See our Privacy Policy and Terms of Use