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mikemckay

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  1. Try to avoid words that you wouldn't use in your daily language. Also how much are you changing this for each school? Seems good!
  2. I agree - better to shorten the reference to the GP you don't have to oversell the point. Additionally, I would avoid 'we' and focus on 'I' or 'me' comments. Good luck!
  3. If you're looking for help you should check out some professional editing services. Some ideas for you: www.gradually.me www.essayedge.com www.admitted.com Good luck man! Wish I could help more. You should post your SOP up here!
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