I'm applying to MPA programs, and several of my recommenders have had a huge influence on my career path and my interest in the field. Currently my SOP mentions them by name, for example: "I emulate the leadership style of my mentor, Jane Doe, by ...." Is this a breach of decorum? I feel it helps personalize the essay, but the MPA is less concerned with research so there's certainly no need for name-dropping in terms of relevant publications or prestige in the field.
In short, should I keep the references by name or remove them from my SOP?
