Don't worry about your spelling errors, Charisma. Since they don't interfere much with meaning, I don't think you would have scored any higher even if they were all fixed.
hey Charisma, I'd give you a 4. I like your issue essay a little better than your argument essay. I like your insightful point that technology doesn't just simplify, it is an end unto itself. It seems like you didn't have much time to develop your second body paragraph about the complicating nature (or lack thereof) of technology. Your argument essay could use more analysis. Instead of just asking rhetorical questions, explain how the potential answers to those questions would affect the argument. Not bad - keep practicing!
