Burgundy Color

Hello, I'm applying for MS in Computer Science/Software Engineering for Fall 2016 intake. Here's the statement of purpose that I have so far and would be eternally grateful if you guys could review and provide your suggestions for improving it ! I apologize for the formatting! Also, I've edited out some names in here (sorry for that!) Do let me know what you think about the SOP. Thanks for reading! - BurgundyColor