[GRE Analytical Writing Critiques]

Hi guys, 

 I am studying for the GRE and I recently wrote my first practice papers (in about 2 or 3 months) for the analytical writing section on the GRE. I was wondering if anyone would mind reading these essays over and critiquing me on what I can do to improve my writing and my GRE score. I am a lot more confident with my argument essay than I am with my issue essay. 

Thanks! 

Argument Essay Practice 1.docx

Issue Essay Practice 1.docx