[GRE Analytical Writing Assessment]

Hi Guys,

I was wondering if I might get some help on the GRE AWA, specifically in regard to essay revision? I wrote two essays, both for the Issue Task and the Analytical Task, as practice for the exam and need someone to review/score it for me. If you could provide any help I would greatly appreciate it.  Here is the scoring guide: https://www.ets.org/gre/institutions/scores/interpret/issue/

I'll attach my essays below.

Thanks,

Gabe

Argument Task.docx

Issue Task.docx