[Essay Critiquing]

4 hours ago, NardyPardy said:

Hi Pratz, 

Check out: https://dxrgroup.com/scoreitnow and https://www.mbacrystalball.com/gre/gre-essay-grader/

Also, your paper is unavailable

Thanks!

[Essay Critiquing]

 

Hi, everyone! I've begun prepping for the GRE and I finally got to practicing an essay task. I've been procrastinating all this while because I'm genuinely scared of the result  Since this is the first time I'm attempting one, and there is no way to get it checked, I was hoping someone here could help me out with it? The scoring rubric is here: https://www.ets.org/gre/revised_general/scores/how/argument_scoring_guide. I've also attached my essay. Please do give your comments so that I know where to improve! If anyone wants to get theirs checked too, I could help out with that. Cheers!

Issue essay 1.docx