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One Big Union

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About One Big Union

  • Birthday 12/21/1974

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  • Location
    Orange, CA
  • Application Season
    2016 Fall
  • Program
    Sociology

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  1. Lots of passive voice. Take out things like "I wish", "I hope", " I believe I" as they demonstrate a timidity in your language. Schools don't want people who believe they can do better or hope they can do better, they want graduate students who already know they're fully capable, currently excel, and will continue. I think you can leave in the figure skating as long as you mention it as an achievement and not rely on it parable for your success in grad school.
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