Just want to say that is really beautiful. Thank you for writing this.
Also know the level of competition and subjectivity that comes into the MFA admissions process. I keep reminding myself that if I don't get in anywhere, it is not a reflection of my writing ability or hard work. In the end, being a writer is so deeply meaningful to me that as long as I choose to continue writing (whether someone accepts me or not), I am on the right path.