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Personal Statement Critique
in Statement of Purpose, Personal History, Diversity
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I am having some serious trouble with my SOP.
I have a very interesting background that I want to make the focus of studying further, working with refugees in Malaysia, but I do not want to sound cliche or overly idealistic. This is the trouble I am having.
Everytime I construct the paragraph I think it is great. Then I go back and read it....
Maybe it is because it is me, but if any of you can offer some input I would greatly appreciate it. Please let me know and I will send in a PM