Need SOP Critiquers/Reviewers

[lily_]

Hello, I was hoping for some constructive criticism on my SOP. It's 500 words for an anthropology department. I have completed a first draft, and anticipate the need for 3-4 revisions before the due date of April 1st.

I would prefer social sciences/anthro grad students (or post-docs!), but anyone who has some insight would be great. Just message me on here, I'm not posting it on the forum.

Thanks!