Help with SOP (Computer Science)

[manuelpuyol]

Hi guys!

I'm going to apply to Columbia's Computer Science MS program. It is my first time applying to a MS and I'd really like if some of you could review my SOP before submitting it.

A little background about me.. I'm from Brazil and I'm a Computer Engineer undergraduate. Unfortunately my GPA isn't the best(72/100 - around 2.74/4), but considering only the last two years, where I took most of my major courses, it is a little better (80/100 - around 3.19/4).

I don't have much research experience, so I focused mostly on my job experience and my thesis, is this a problem?

Here is the link.

Thank you guys in advance!