SOP needs a loooot of work (MSW)

[TiaMSW]

Hey, so as the title states I need a lot of help with my SOP. Im applying to a masters program in social work and I plan to specialize in disabilities. If you could please give criticism on it I would greatly appreciate it! 

[TiaMSW]

Hey, if anyone could give it a quick look-over I would appreciate it!

[TiaMSW]

On 11/26/2018 at 3:57 AM, Rahul Kartikeyan said:

Hi,

I don't have a good knowledge on the specialization you mentioned. But I think I can help you with the standard SOP format and you can work on it. It becomes easy when you split the topic.

Introduction paragraph- Start with a bang. Clearly state what is the specialization that you want get. Be honest and do not try an anecdote.

Middle paragraph- Write about you development as an undergraduate student and projects/thesis that you have done. Use some technical words.

Job/internship experience paragraph- Write about the nature of work and responsibilities you took up in your job/internship. Present what you learned from this experience.

The conclusion paragraph- Write about why you choose this university and the special features that you observed here. Do a small research about the professors in the university and pick the best and write about him expressing that you are very interested in learning from him.

Even though it is not in detailed explanation I tried my best to help you. 

Thank you.?

Thank you for this information