Hello! Can someone help me read my Computer Science Statement of Purpose? I've been working hard on it but not sure if it's good enough. Can someone help me validate?

[normanpaps]

Hi Grad Cafe community,

You guys are awesome and I really value people's opinions on here (been a silent lurker). I've been polishing my SOP for a computer science masters program work but am not sure how it stands. Would anyone on here be interested in helping me read it? Please message me and I will send you a google doc of my SOP! 

Thank you in advance!

Edited September 15, 2020 by normanpaps