SOP Review for Sociology :-)

[csfromsf]

Hi everyone! Have been lurking here for a long time but finally made an account to get some help. I'm applying to three sociology master's programs in the UK, and am looking for some lovely people to review my SOP. I'm a a first-gen college student and therefore this process has been very difficult for me- that being said, I am super super open to all critique for my SOP, as I need all the help I can get ? thank you all so much !! 

[jellati]

I am in anthropology but I will take a look, send me a message with a link to a google doc. I can definitely help out with grammar and syntax, and I can at least let you know if the content of your letter is cohesive. In return, would mind taking a look at my SOP?