SOP Critique (Ph.D. Computer Science)

[Decadence]

I have written two SOPs (long and short) which are actually two type of general templates which I will use as backbones to design the Univ specific SOPs. Would anyone like to evaluate?

Thank you very much.

[Go_Girl]

Good to see CS aspirant. I'd be really glad but please note I am just a CS final year under grad student. And I am applying for MS. So I might not be qualified enough. But In case u r willing I'd be happy to evaluate. I'll eval urs and u eval mine? How about that?

[Decadence]

Good to see CS aspirant. I'd be really glad but please note I am just a CS final year under grad student. And I am applying for MS. So I might not be qualified enough. But In case u r willing I'd be happy to evaluate. I'll eval urs and u eval mine? How about that?

Yeah, I think that would be fine. Let's help each other LOL

[ts10vsg]

I am a currently a reasearch graduate... PM me if you are interested in reviewing your SoP!

Cheers!

I have written two SOPs (long and short) which are actually two type of general templates which I will use as backbones to design the Univ specific SOPs. Would anyone like to evaluate?

Thank you very much.