Can I get a quick critique of my Sop (Media Studies MA)

[pt9m]

Would anyone like to give my statement of purpose a brief critique? It's for a media studies MA program.

thanks!

[eklavya]

send me a message if you are still looking. also include your email id.. i will send the word file as an attachment

[BlueRose]

I will do yours if you do mine! I'm on the biology end of bioengineering.

Yes, it starts with "As a child...". I apologize in advance.

[banana21]

If you still want to!

goop84@Yahoo.com