SOP Review -- PHD in Computer Science

[Crispy Potato]

Hi,

Can someone help me review my SOP. I am applying for PHD in computer science.

I am in a dilemma. Instead of writing the SOP in an essay style, I have written it with sub-sections and headings.

I read a lot of SOPs written in eassy style and I found them boring. It was very difficult to find any particular information in them. Hence, I decided to write mine with headings and sections, so that the reader can easily find what he is looking for.

I am kind of in a mess right now. Can someone please help me with my SOP.

Thanks

Potato :-)