SOP Critique for a masters\PHD program in a top 10 school

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I'm applying to a Msc. degree in one of the top 10 schools, I have good GPA and a very good career but almost no research experience, I have managed to get some good recommandation letters but I still think that the lack of research experiece is a big problem with my application, I really need my SOP to stand-out, anyone can help me with some critique? please let me know and I will PM my SOP, any help is appreciated!