Will someone read my Berkeley personal history statement?

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I'm an engineering student with no clue how to write this diversity statement. I'm not particularly diverse either.

I'd be happy if some kind essay rock star would take a look at what I've written so far. It's due tonight. My main goal is that the essay is clear and that I don't come across as an idiot. But any help is appreciated.

I would be happy to take a look at an essay of yours. Even though I'm an engineer, I'm pretty good with grammar and making essays more concise, although for some reason I can't do this with my own essays.

Just give me a private message, and let me know your "qualifications."