Personal Statement Fletcher

[IRToni]

Hi!

I am applying to MA in International Relations for Fall 2012. I'm from Germany, having majored in East Asian Politics, Maths and Chinese Studies.

I was wondering if one of you (maybe even a native speaker) would be willing to look at my Personal Statement for the MALD at Fletcher. Since they have another really personal essay, I wrote it more like a Statement of Purpose, but I'm not so sure if the statement (1) conveys what I want to say and do and (2) is ok in terms of style, language, content, structure etc.

Thanks in advance,

Toni