Urgent: Any Volunteer SOP Editors?

[Mrs. Grad]

Hello all!

I recently got a job at a university that offers tuition remission for graduate school, so I'm throwing together a VERY last minute application for a MS in Higher Education program. The application technically calls for a simple essay, but I wanted to write a strong statement of purpose, despite only having worked/studied in this field for a grand total of two weeks. I need to submit my application on Monday, so I'm on a bit of a time crunch and reworking the entire statement is not an option in my case.

Might anybody be willing to look my draft over and point out any glaring errors?

[fuzzylogician]

I can try and look it over for you, if it's not too late. Just PM me with the text (no attachments, please).

And in case it is too late -- good luck!