Hello! Can you help me with a light revision?

[theapparatus]

Hi everyone!

(1) Does anyone have time to read my writing sample and help me with ambiguities/grammatical mistakes in my english? (would be cool if by a native English speaker....)

It will be an easy read. Just fast reading to look for any grammatical deficiency which should not be in it...

(2) If you want, you can also comment on it and tell what you think about it....

You can choose one or two of my requests

PM me with your email:

Everyone can send their email with a private message so I can turn back to you with my writing sample

It is about sexualities, sexual classification, Foucault....

Now I am going to sleep after hours of staring at PC

C. from Istanbul