Would sb be so nice and review my LOR

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Hey,

as I am allowed to see all me letters of recommendation and edit them, i was wondering if somebody would be so kind and review them. I do not want to upload them here, so if yes please be so kind and give me your mail adress.

Thanks :-)

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Hey and another question: should professors just sign with their academic titel or with every titel say have? To be concret: my prof is also a CEO...

Please do not be surprised by all these question, i just never had to submit a LOR as they are uncommon in Germany...