Need Critique on my SOP - 500 word limit!

[peter_parker]

Hello everybody--

I've lurked this forum for a while but finally joined.

I'm applying to Masters in Applied Statistics programs, so I have later deadlines (February 1st mostly) --- but my FIRST deadline is Saturday, January 14th by noon!

I need someone to look over my SOP and give any advice/ criticism at all!

It's still needs a heck of a lot of polish and editing. I plan on working on it like mad over the next few days.

I come from a social sciences background (maybe a bit unconventional), but I think anyone (English/ Math/ History) can weigh in on it and give advice.

I really don't want my SOP up on this forum til the end of time so let me know in this thread or PM and I'll PM it to you! Thanks!