Feedback on my Statement of Puporse please!!

[RodrigoD]

Hello,

Will someone review my statement of purpose? I am having a tough time with it.

Thanks!

Rodrigo

[coffeeplease]

I have some time and can give you some general feedback if you like. PM if you're interested.

[splitends]

Have you already applied? Is there just a super late deadline for something, or do you want it assessed even if it's too late to change anything?

If it's the former, I'm happy to take a look-- PM me? If it's the latter, then I feel really uncomfortable critiquing when it's too late to edit (I've done that before, and it just feels terrible if you see something that really does need changing...)

Either way, good luck!