Seeking proofread of near-final draft, emergency planning program

[affguy]

I'm bored and looking to shift careers. Transcripts uploaded and GRE scores that should be fine, I'm Ieft with a SoP that needs to be good enough to fill some gaps. Undergrad included great grades at poor schools too long ago to make a big deal of, and work experience has been marginally relevent (thus the career shift), so the SoP has proven to be a somewhat challenging sale. Still, I'm one full re-write, one partial, and one friendly proofread in, and I'm looking for one or two more critical reviews before submittal in the next day or two.

Edited May 28, 2012 by affguy