Need feedback for my SOP in Electrical Engineering

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“With a set of interconnected nodes and branches with changeable weights and a learning algorithm, you can design an intelligent self-learning system” said my lecturer in Artificial Neural Network (ANN). That statement made me introspect myself. After three years into electrical engineering, I felt like I found my goal for life. I signed up for the course on ANN and as the course progressed, I explored more on the applications of the Neural Networks and Intelligent Systems which encouraged me to work much sincerely towards my objectives. At the end of the semester, I was able to write a paper on Face recognition, which was my first publication in college journal. And, today I know where I am headed.

 

In college, Engineering Mathematics became my major interest. I was intrigued to find out how major engineering problems use mathematical models and techniques to reach to solution. I enjoyed using mathematics to solve engineering problems. During the 3^rd semester, I worked on a project on Artificial Tank Game using C++. I devised two-dimensional model for position detection of the tank and the algorithm worked well for intelligent operation of tank. While on 5^th semester I worked on a project of “Innovation Lab” to develop an autonomous chess playing robot using Microbot Teachmover. . This time I approached the problem based on Polar co-ordinate system and 2-D Cartesian co-ordinate system and the model devised worked perfectly for the robot. These experiences helped me learn how mathematical approach to problems is essential to design an intelligent system.

 

 

Even with the involvement in various projects and activities, I was able good grades in the class and such activities proved fruitful when I was offered to work on the UGC funded research project as my final year project under the supervision of Prof. Indraman Tamrakar. In this project, we designed new form of Electronic Load Controller (ELC) and mathematically analyzed our proposed form of ELC with previous forms. I am currently working as a research assistant on the same project and my interest & knowledge on research activities has only strengthened more. I learned more about the power electronics, power system, renewable energy sources, micro grid and control system while working on this project, I realized that I could merge my knowledge in power and control system with my newly found interest in Neural Network and carry on further research on intelligent control and operation of Power System.  More importantly, my skills on MATLAB Simulation and programming, presenting one’s ideas through papers and analytical thinking increased during this project, which will be valuable tools for my success in graduate studies.

 

My country is currently facing a huge energy crisis and will continue to face the problem if we do not come up with honest and intelligent solutions. Adding more energy sources is not the only solution that would help us; I believe we need to use the available energy sources more intelligently and effectively. With this goal, I am planning to research on the novel and emerging concept, ‘Smart Grid’ that can be applied to developing nations. With just an undergraduate degree, few undergrad level projects and a single research experience, I personally feel I cannot be a better scholar and an independent motivated researcher I aspire to be. So, I want to pursue graduate degree leading to Ph.D in order to dedicate myself to research activities and develop myself as a competitive full-fledged research professional to summon the present crisis faced by developing nations like mine.

 

Experience during the college days on various projects and as the research assistant on the ELC project equipped me with qualities required to be successful in graduate school. My experience of working both singly and as part of team has equipped me with both individual research skill and team skill. My three years tenure as class representative has provided me proper skills to communicate with people and my experience as chief editor in Departmental Journal, “E-novation” provided me a valuable skill to analyze papers and convey ideas in written form. All these experiences have shaped up my personality and provided me with invaluable tools required for graduate studies.

 

The Neural Network and Pattern Recognition Laboratory at University of %%%%%% provides the best opportunity to research in Neural Networks and their application in smart operation of Power Grid. The ongoing research on Smart Power Grid and Demand Side Load Management under the guidance of Assistant Professor %%%%%% coheres to my research interests. His areas of work are of great interest to me and I believe that I can prove to be an effective and reliable team member in carrying out cutting edge research in this domain. Using the knowledge available from the work done in the lab so far I am sure that I can contribute to the activities that will be carried out in the Lab during and after my tenure as research assistant.

 

 

P.S. I thinks its verbose. Please help me in simplifying ideas. And point out things I missed out and need to mention about.