SOP swap?

[StatsNerd]

Any psych people want to take a look at my SOP? I'd be happy to look at any SOPs you have as well. 

 

I'm still struggling to get a general structure down before I start tailoring it to individual schools. There are some holes now and needs lots of polishing but I just wanted to get some feedback before I go any further. I don't feel comfortable showing it to my advisor yet even though he keeps asking to see it. 

 

So... PM me if you're willing to take a quick look. Thanks!