Could someone take a look at my SOP please? For a M.S. in Marine Biology program.

[BattlePope]

Hi guys,

 

I was wondering if anyone could take a look at my statement of purpose? It will be for a master's program in marine biology. It's still a very rough draft but I was hoping I could get some feedback on it to help steer me in the right direction.

 

How does it flow? Does it have a logical progression? Am I on the right track? What should I add? What could I remove?

 

If you'd be willing to take a look at it, let me know and I can message it to you.

 

Thanks so much!

[Flandre Scarlet]

Yes, sure, message me.

[oceanlover]

You can message me as well! I'm also applying for my masters in marine bio

[sawatch22]

Feel free to message me as well.  I'm applying for biology PhD.

[JJ610]

Would anyone like to switch with me, as well? I'm applying for animal behavior programs, both PhD and Master's. 

[katethekitcat]

You can message me yours if you'd like a read. I am applying for public health programs, but I have a biology degree.

Edited November 21, 2013 by katethekitcat