anyone willing to review my statement of purpose?

[oceanlover]

my first application deadline is in a week, and was wondering if anyone would be willinging to privately review/edit my statement of purpose? its for a masters progam in biological sciences, but i'm looking to work with faculty in the marine biology field.  constructive criticism welcome and I'd be willing to trade and read yours too!

 

thanks in advance!

[sunpenguin]

Would be happy to read it! I've already submitted mine so can't trade, but would love to help if I can.

[zar12]

Could anyone please help me in writing my SOP for ms in biology... There r few things I want to add but don't know whether it is ok to write it or not... Plz help out!

Thanks