Readers for a Writing Sample? (Please)

[Defenestration a la Mode]

Hello,

 

I am finishing up my applications for Sociology programs and have finally turned my attention to my last piece, my writing sample. I'm using a paper I did in college, but unfortunately I don't think I ever lived up to my potential in regards to paper-writing while in school. I've been revising it somewhat, but I was hoping to get a few other opinions and constructive criticism (feel free to emphasize either). I don't know if messages work better, or if you'd rather get it in an email, just let me know. I felt weird copying and pasting 12 pages of a paper up here, but I don't have any qualms about that either.

 

I'm happy to offer something in return, whether that be advice or reading a paper for you in return, either way I appreciate it.

 

Thank you very much,

Will

[gellert]

Sure thing. Message me and I'll give you my email.