Need help on my Psychology/Education SoP

[sarah_123]

Hello,

 

Anyone willing to critique my statement of purpose (using it for applying to Psychology and Education PhD programs)? I already submitted it for one university as is but I'm afraid I need to make it much stronger to stand a chance. Please let me know if you could critique and I will pm it to you.

 

Thanks so much!

[NoSleepTilBreuckelen]

Hey Sarah_123 - would you be interested in swapping SoPs?

[Flandre Scarlet]

Sure, message me.

[sarah_123]

NoSleepTilBreuckelen >> sure, swapping is fine; I'll be happy to provide feedback!

[artlesspredilection]

Swap?