May I get some feedback on my SOP? For a Master in International/Develpmt Economic in Europe

[lexi42]

I would gladly send it to you via PM.

 

I can have it proofread for grammar and vocabulary by other people but I really need help as far as content. 

 

I may end up hiring one those web service to do that, but I figured I would ask here first.

 

Thanks a bunch.