Mind looking over my SOP?

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Hi guys I know there have been a ton of SOP's posted recently, but would anyone mind looking over mine? I feel completely lost at the moment and I am finding it very difficult to write about myself. Here is my SOP google doc.

Other useful information: GRE: 157 V 158 Q 4.0 AW Undergrad GPA: 3.65 Grad GPA: 3.87 2.5 years of research

I plan on applying to approx. 10 schools, both psychology and neuroscience programs. Thank you so much to anyone who helps!