Critique a PhD Computer Science SOP.. Need Feedback

[foreignstudent]

Hello

 

I am applying for PhD in CS in Fall 2015 and as the deadlines are nearing I would appreciate if anybody could evaluate and give feedback for my SOP.

 

I'd be happy to PM anyone who would help me

[agnibann]

Hi,

I can help you with your review. Please send it across to me.

Regards,

Agnibann Basu

Instructional Designer

Kolkata, India

[foreignstudent]

Thanks a ton agnibann,

I have PM'ed you my SOP