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I'm applying to MPA programs, and several of my recommenders have had a huge influence on my career path and my interest in the field. Currently my SOP mentions them by name, for example: "I emulate the leadership style of my mentor, Jane Doe, by ...." Is this a breach of decorum? I feel it helps personalize the essay, but the MPA is less concerned with research so there's certainly no need for name-dropping in terms of relevant publications or prestige in the field. 

 

In short, should I keep the references by name or remove them from my SOP?

 

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This is just my opinion which should be taken with a grain of salt since I don't know your specific field at all...

 

I agree that it helps personalize the essay and connect your specific path to your career with the letters that will come with your application. I would give some details on how they have influenced you, not just state that you look up to them (which I think you were planning on with the "..." above, but just making sure).

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