Rate my Issue Essay

[Danish Sinha]

In order to become well-rounded individuals, all college students should be required to take courses in which they read poetry, novels, mythology, and other types of imaginative literature.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.

Students will become a well-rounded individual by learning other creative courses which they are interested in. Courses like poetry, novels, mythology, and imaginative literature may not interest all the students. Therefore, it will become a burden on those students. 

Literature may make you a well-rounded individual. During the time when they are pursuing their major courses, this may become a burden for them as they have to spend extra time learning literature courses. Some students may also be pursuing tough courses and adding mythology, which is nowhere related to their course may just create stress for them. Students must be given the option to pursue the courses of their choice and not flooding them with literature. This may also help those students who want to learn courses they enjoy and are interested in.This student may also not have any interest in literature like courses but other creative subjects like dancing, painting etc. Adding compulsory courses may even not allow them to take courses of their choice.  

For students, it would also be a waste of money, as they have to pay fees for these extra credits. The student may not enjoy poetry and thereby just a burden for their semester. Adding extra courses on poetry, mythology; may also increase the semester length which would delay their step in their profession career. Some students may be interested to gain knowledge from literature courses but for those who are very serious for they major courses will have to pay the extra toll. Therefore, Colleges should focus on the demand of the students and not add extra literature courses. 

Colleges and Universities should focus on getting the students ready for their major field. They can add optional courses for students, noting theses courses don't become a burden on them.

[TheBumChikiBum]

1. 500 words. Please.
2. You can have a much much better start. Try reading a Manhattan GRE book. It has nice samples and explanation in it.
3. Bigger Paragraphs.
4. State real world example or related quotes, if you can.
5. Ending is crappy and needs more flesh. PLEASE WRITE AT-LEAST 5 sentences in your conclusion.
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