Personal Statement review Willing to switch

[emma_emerson]

I was wondering if someone could look over my personal statement for me. I could look at yours, if you look at my personal statement. I am applying to HCI programs. Does not matter if you are familiar with the area. Just need a general review

personal statement.docx

Edited December 19, 2015 by emma_emerson

[NWFreeheel11]

Hey Emma, 

I am actually writing advisor in my graduate department. I can help you with your statement, but the link to the file doesnt work. Let me know if you want some feedback. 

[Happy89]

I would love to review your essay. Would anyone be willing to review mine?